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The condensed directions: Read the cue, react to the cue. There's no right answer, no research required. I cite sources where applicable but it's all about coming up with creative answers. Winners are picked in a week.

The number one rule? Have FUN!!!

05/23 - I'll be naming final winners this week!

Friday, November 13, 2009

After Work Wk #3

Storytime: This week, we continue our story. Below are paragraphs 1,2 (thanks to Tabitha), and 3 (thanks to Autumn). You write paragraph #4, taking the story in whatever direction you like. Just please keep it to a paragraph. A winner will be chosen and then we will continue next week. And so on, building on the previous winners, until we reach a conclusion.
After a long day at work, all I wanted was to sit back, put my feet up, and enjoy a glass of wine before my husband and kids arrived home. I had just settled back in my chair when I heard a crash upstairs.

"Great," I thought, getting up to attend to the situation, "Pickles must have fallen off the bed again. That damn crippled old dog can't see the nose attached to his face." But as I turned toward the staircase, I saw Pickles lying contentedly on the top step, which meant it wasn't him who had caused the loud crash...

Frantically I grabbed my cell phone and headed up the stairs. A million horror movies flashed through my mind where the stupid girl runs up the stairs to check out the noise and I tried to nervously laugh my fear away. While I didn't really want to head up the stairs I knew that was the first thing the children would do when they got home. I smiled as I thought of my kids despite the pounding in my heart. Somehow thinking of the girls made me a little braver. Mama Bear was on the prowl and she was out to protect her home from whatever the pending danger may be. I was almost at the top of the stairs when the second to last stair creaked loudly. I paused and held my breath hoping whatever it was up here had not heard me.

On to the fourth paragraph!

Winner!!! (11/20/09)
My fervent hope was in vain. Whatever it was had heard the creaking step and was even now approaching the landing. A large oak chest obscured my view but I could hear soft shuffling footsteps and the wheezy breathing of a sizeable living organism. My heart in my mouth, I waited and watched.
Big Ups To: jabblog
Method of Selection: She said chest. Hahahaha.

2 comments:

C. Beth said...

I reached the top of the stairs without incident and began carefully treading down the hallway. Then I noticed it--a faint green glow coming from under my daughter's bedroom door. I held my breath, reached out a hand, and turned the doorknob as slowly and silently as possible. When the door was open, my eyes were first drawn to the closet door, which was swinging slightly on its hinges. Then I looked for the source of the green light, immediately realizing it was coming from the window. With trepidation, I walked to the window, and grasped the edges of the closed curtains. I took a deep breath and prepared to open them.

jabblog said...

My fervent hope was in vain. Whatever it was had heard the creaking step and was even now approaching the landing. A large oak chest obscured my view but I could hear soft shuffling footsteps and the wheezy breathing of a sizeable living organism. My heart in my mouth, I waited and watched.

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